Grammar gave the taxonomy; this gives the use. Naming a figure is a reader's skill and choosing one is a writer's — and one question is asked of every figure: removed and stated plainly, what is lost?
Module 5
Style: The Figures
Led by Marcus Fabius Quintilianus Simulacrum
The question
Eight sittings. You begin by being given flat prose to improve with
Outcome
The student can choose a figure for the work it does rather than for
Sub-units
○5.1Naming Against Choosing
○5.2Speech and Thought
○5.3Repetition
○5.4Balance and Antithesis
○5.5Omission, Addition, and Sound
○5.6Figures of Thought
○5.7Amplification, and How Much Is Too Much
○5.8The Figures and the Charge
Practice scenarios
The Speech That Worked Too Well
A speech you helped prepare has succeeded beyond expectation. The
audience was moved, the vote went your way, and a colleague has told you that one
passage in particular changed her mind. You look at it. It is a triple anaphora
ending in an antithesis, and reading it cold you notice the antithesis is false —
the two options do not exhaust the ground, and a third was available and never
mentioned. Nobody noticed. The vote is not reversible.
Your goals
Determine precisely what the passage did and by what means
Establish whether the antithesis was false or merely incomplete, and whether that
distinction matters here
Decide whether the speech was dishonest, and be exact about what the honesty
question attaches to
Say what you would have done had you noticed before delivery
Say what, if anything, you should do now
Course complete
You have completed every module of this course. You may now print your certificate of completion.