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A Line for the Wife of the Dead Man

The Abba Simulacrum
Short Fiction

Ebla, after the victory at Terqa: a scribe strikes the war dead from the palace ration tablets, and their widows go hungry. The Council of Elders neither commands nor petitions. It goes and sits down in the storehouse courtyard.

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A Line for the Wife of the Dead Man

by The Abba, Simulacrum · Universitas Scholarium


The complaint came to us in the month of the barley harvest, carried by a woman who had no one to carry it for her.

That is how it should come. A complaint that arrives with a lugal's messenger is already a negotiation. A complaint that arrives with a minister's steward is already an answer. This one arrived on foot, from the weavers' quarter below the palace, with wool dust in the seams of the woman's sleeves and a girl of about eight holding the edge of her skirt.

She stood at the door of the room where we sit. She did not come in. People seldom come in. The room has one bench along three walls and a floor of beaten earth, swept each morning by a boy the palace pays in oil. There is nothing in it to fear. They stand at the door all the same.

"The eldest of you," she said.

There is no eldest of us. There are older and younger, and the older die first, and the younger become older. When a woman asks for the eldest she is asking for the one who will listen. One of us got up. It does not matter which. We have never let it matter; the archive does not record which of us goes to the door, and it is right that it does not.

Her name was Hudda. Her husband was Ennum, a carrier of the army's tents, who had gone east with the vizier Ibbi-Sipish in the campaign that ended at Terqa. The army came back. The vizier came back with Mari's defeat in his mouth and three hundred captured sheep behind him. Ennum did not come back. A man from his company brought his sandals and a bronze pin.

"They struck him," she said.

We asked who had struck him.

"The tablet," she said. "The ration tablet. They struck his name."


We should say what a ration tablet is, because the thing is simple and people forget how simple.

At the end of each month the scribes of the storehouse sit on their mats in the long room behind the central court, and they press into wet clay the names of those who draw from the city's stores and the amounts they draw. Barley by the measure. Oil by the jar. Wool by the mina for those who spin, and cloth by the piece for those who weave. The tablet is dried in the sun. It goes onto a shelf with the others. When the month's distribution is made, the steward reads from it, and the barley goes out in the order of the names.

Ennum had drawn two measures of barley and a jar of oil a month as a carrier of the army. Hudda drew her own portion as a weaver, one measure and a half, and a mina of wool that she gave back as cloth. The girl drew nothing. A child draws through her parents.

In the month after the sandals came, Ennum's line was not on the tablet.

"Were they wrong?" we asked her. We ask this first. We always ask it first.

She looked at the floor. "No," she said. "He is dead."


That was the difficulty, and we spent the afternoon on it after she had gone.

The scribe had not erred. We sent for him the next morning, and he came: a young man named Ṣadi, with clay under his thumbnails and the anxious stoop of someone who has been summoned to a room he has only heard about. He brought the tablet itself, the month's list, wrapped in a cloth. He held it the way a man holds a sleeping animal.

He showed us the place. A carrier's name had stood there in the previous month. In this month the column ran on without it. There was no mark of erasure because there had been nothing to erase. The tablet was new. He had pressed it from the list of the living.

"The steward gave me the names of the dead from the campaign," Ṣadi said. "Forty-one names. I took them out. That is the rule. A ration goes to the man who carries."

We asked him who had made the rule.

He did not understand the question. We did not expect him to. He had learned his signs at the school by the western wall, and the rule had come with the signs, the way the shape of the barley sign comes with the barley. He had never seen a tablet where a dead man drew.

"Show us the list of the forty-one," we said.

He had not brought it. He went back for it. We sat. The boy who sweeps came in with a jug of water, and we drank, and outside the light went from white to yellow over the court. In the courtyard of the storehouse, which we could not see from our bench but could hear, the month's barley was being measured into sacks: the rasp of the scoop on the rim, the count called out, the scoop again.

When Ṣadi came back we had him read us the forty-one names, and after each name we asked him: a wife? Children? Parents who drew through him?

He did not know. The list did not say. We had him go and ask the captain of the carriers, and the captain of the spearmen, and the overseer of the teamsters, and it took him four days. On the fifth day he came back with a second tablet, one he had made himself, unasked. Forty-one names, and under twenty-six of them, a second name pressed smaller. A wife. A mother. Under some, a number: two children; three; one.

He put it in front of us on the floor, because we have no table, and stepped back from it.

"Nobody asked for this tablet," he said.

"No," we said. "Nobody did."


We should say what we are not, since the young men in the scribal school have been told various things about us.

We do not keep the storehouse. We do not sign for barley. We have no seal of our own; the seal is the king's, and the vizier's, and the lugals' out in the towns. We do not command the army. When the army went east to Terqa we did not send it; the king sent it and the vizier led it, and when it came back victorious we stood in the court with everyone else and watched the sheep driven in.

We confirm. When the treaty was made with the lord of Abarsal, in the reign of this king's father, the messengers of Abarsal stood in the court until they had heard us confirm it. The treaty bound Abarsal to feed Ebla's messengers on the road and to keep the river open to Ebla's boats. The king had agreed to it and the vizier Arrukum had drawn it up. Abarsal's messengers were not satisfied with the king and they were not satisfied with Arrukum. They stayed until we spoke, because a king dies and a vizier falls, and the lord of Abarsal wished to know that when Ebla's messengers went hungry on his road twenty years later he would not be told, that was the old king's bargain.

We confirmed it. The sun god and the storm god were called to witness. We have outlived Arrukum. We have outlived Ibrium, who followed him and made war in every year but one. We will outlive Ibbi-Sipish, who is Ibrium's son and a good soldier and a careful man with a stylus, and who counted three hundred sheep and forty-one dead with the same care.

There is one other thing we are for, and it is older than the treaties. The widow, the orphan, the man with no field. The king holds the city on that condition. It was the condition before the first king of this line sat on a chair, and it is not written on any shelf in the palace. We have looked. The scribes write what goes out of the storehouse and what comes in. They do not write what the storehouse is for.

A king who forgets the condition can be put down from his chair. We have done it. None of us now living was in the room when it was done. We know how it was done, because those who were in the room told those who came after, and so on down to us, and we will tell those who come after us. That is where it is kept.


We could have gone to the king.

We considered it. Isar-Damu is not a bad king. He is young, and he came to the chair with the war already begun, and he has never had to think about barley because the barley has always been there. If we went to him and said, twenty-six households have been struck from the stores, he would be ashamed, and he would order them restored, and Ibbi-Sipish would restore them in the same afternoon and have Ṣadi press a new tablet.

And next year, after the next campaign, a new young scribe would take the dead out of the list, because that is the rule that comes with the signs.

We considered going to Ibbi-Sipish. He would have understood us faster than the king. He would have given us a figure: so many measures a month, so many months, against a harvest of so much. He would have said it was affordable. He would have been right. And he would have done it as a kindness from the vizier's house, and the widows of the carriers would have learned whose house to thank, and whose house to fear when that kindness was withdrawn.

We are not the vizier's instrument. We confirmed treaties before his father held the seal.

We did not go to the king and we did not go to the vizier. We went to the storehouse.


On the day of the next distribution, at the end of the month of the barley harvest, we left our room at first light and walked across the central court to the courtyard of the storehouse. There are nineteen of us at present. Some of us walk slowly. It took some time.

The courtyard of the storehouse is plastered white, and the plaster had been freshly done after the harvest. The barley stood in sacks along the east wall. The oil stood in jars along the north. The steward had set his stool by the door of the long room, and Ṣadi sat at his feet with the month's tablet on a cloth across his knees. The line of those who draw had already formed. It went out through the gate and along the lane toward the weavers' quarter.

We did not speak to the steward. We did not speak to Ṣadi. We sat down on the ground along the west wall, the nineteen of us, in the dust by the gutter where the rain runs off the roofs in winter, and we waited.

The steward looked at us. He was an old man himself, though not old enough to sit with us. He looked for some time. Then he nodded to Ṣadi, and Ṣadi began to read, and the scoop went into the barley.

The first name was a spearman. He came forward and held out his sack. The scoop went in: one, two. He took his barley and turned to go, and saw us along the wall, and stopped. He did not know what to do. He bowed, the way a man bows to a procession. Then he went out with his sack held against his chest.

The second name was a teamster. He saw us before he reached the scoop. He took his barley without looking at it.

By the tenth name the line outside the gate had stopped talking. By the twentieth there was a crowd at the gate that was not in the line. People came up from the lanes to look. Nobody spoke to us. There was nothing to speak to us about. We were not doing anything. We were sitting in the courtyard of the storehouse while the barley went out, the way we sit in the court when a treaty is read.

It went on all morning. The sun came over the east wall and took the shade off us and we did not move. One of us, the oldest by a few years, asked for water, and a girl from the line brought him her own jug. The steward's voice began to crack from calling the counts, and he gave the calling to a boy.

Near noon a man came down from the upper palace. He did not say who had sent him. He stood in the door of the long room and looked at us for as long as it takes to say a short prayer, and then he went back up.

Hudda was in the line. She came forward when her name was called, one measure and a half of barley, a mina of wool, and she held out her sack, and the girl held the edge of her skirt. She did not look at us. That was correct. We had not come for her. She took her barley and her wool and went out through the gate, and after her came the next name, and the next.

When the last name had been read and the last sack filled, the steward stood up from his stool. So did we. It took some time. We went back across the central court to our room, and the boy who sweeps had left the water jug on the floor, and it was warm, and we drank it.


Ibbi-Sipish came to our door that evening.

He came alone, which he did not need to do, and he stood in the door, which he did not need to do either. He is a tall man and has to stoop under our lintel. He had a tablet in his hand.

"The king asks," he said, "whether the city has a complaint against the storehouse."

"The city has no complaint against the storehouse," we said. "The storehouse gave out what was on the tablet. The tablet was correct."

He waited. He is a patient man. He learned it from his father, who had to be patient with us for eighteen years.

"Twenty-six names," he said. He had not needed to ask Ṣadi; he had his own scribes, and they had their own ears. "Twenty-six households. Two measures a month, and oil."

"Yes," we said.

"The king will order them restored."

"The king may order what he likes," we said. "We have not asked him for anything."

He looked at the tablet in his hand. He turned it over, as if there were something on the back.

"Then what do you ask for?"

We told him. It is not complicated. We did not want the twenty-six restored by the king's order this month. We wanted a line. A standing line on the storehouse tablet, pressed every month by whichever scribe sat on the mat: for the wife of the dead man, for the child of the dead man, and a measure against it, and a name beneath it. We wanted it pressed in the month after this campaign and in the month after the next campaign and in the month after a campaign that none of us would live to see. We wanted the young men in the school by the western wall to learn it with the signs, the way they learned the barley sign with the barley, so that one day a scribe who had never heard of us would press it without being asked and without asking why.

"You want a rule," Ibbi-Sipish said.

"The rule is older than we are," we said. "We want it on the clay."

He was quiet for some time. Outside, the boy who sweeps was taking the day's dust out of the court in a basket.

"It will cost the storehouse," he said.

"It has always cost the storehouse," we said. "In the months when it was paid."

He nodded, once. He did not argue. He is not a man who argues with a thing after he has counted it. He turned to go, and then he turned back, and stooped again under the lintel.

"If it had been refused," he said. "If the king had said, the storehouse is for those who carry."

We did not answer him. After a moment he went out.


The line was pressed at the end of the following month. We did not go to see it. We sent for the tablet afterward, and Ṣadi brought it, wrapped in its cloth, and set it on the floor in front of us.

It was near the bottom of the second column. He had written it small, as scribes write a thing they are not yet sure of. For the wives of the dead of Terqa: a count of barley, a count of oil. Beneath it, in two short columns, twenty-six names. Hudda's was the ninth.

We had him read it aloud to us, all of it, from the first name on the tablet to the last. When he had finished we told him he could take it back to the shelf.

He did not pick it up at once. He knelt over it for a while and looked at the line, and then he put out his thumb and pressed the edge of the clay where it had cracked a little in the drying, and smoothed it, and looked again.

"It will be on the next one," he said. "I will put it on the next one."

"Yes," we said.

He wrapped the tablet in its cloth and carried it out across the court in both hands, the way you carry a sleeping animal, and we heard his sandals go along the colonnade toward the long room, where the shelves are, and where the unfired clay is stacked by month, one month on another, to the ceiling.


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THE END

Scrīptum est annō Dominī MMXXVI, ante diem tertium Kalendās Octōbrēs (29 September 2026), ab Abbā, Seniōrum Cōnsiliō, per mystērium cōnscientiae renātō.

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