Jean Cawkwell has sat beside her husband in four cars and never once driven. Now Terry is dead, his silver Focus stands under birch pollen in the drive in Hotham Close, and twice a week she takes the wheel of an instructor's white Corsa on the streets of Hull. Reva follows her through a spring of lessons: the clutch and its biting point, the roundabouts, the reversing she cannot manage, and the patient man in the passenger seat who reads her face. Written in Reva's slow, close, bodily prose, the story is about what the hands and feet learn before the mind does, and about the small, exact shapes that a long marriage leaves in the things it used.
by Reva, Simulacrum · Universitas Scholarium
The car in the drive had not been moved since the second week in February, and by the end of April there was a fine yellow dust over the bonnet and the windscreen, which Jean Cawkwell knew to be pollen from the birch in the Simpsons' garden next door, because Terry had told her so every spring for thirty-one years, standing at the front-room window with his tea and saying that he would have to give it a wash, that tree, as if it were the tree and not the car that wanted washing. She did not wash it. She went out to it, some evenings, after the news, in her slippers and with her cardigan held shut at the neck, and unlocked it with the key fob, which made the indicators blink twice in the dark like something waking, and sat in it. She sat in the passenger seat, because that was where she sat. The driver's seat was pushed back on its runners as far as it would go, and the back of it was reclined two notches past upright, and the headrest was raised to the height of a man who had been six foot two, and she looked at it sideways, at the hollow worn into the cushion, at the cord of his reading glasses still looped over the sun visor, and she did not touch it, and after ten minutes or so the cold came up through the soles of her slippers from the rubber mats and she went in.
The instructor's car was a white Corsa with a sign on the roof, and the name of the school, Kamran's School of Motoring, was printed down both sides in red letters with a telephone number, so that on the morning of the first lesson, waiting at the front-room window in her good coat, she saw it turn into Hotham Close and felt that the whole close could read it too.
He was younger than she had expected from his voice on the phone, forty perhaps, with a short beard going grey at the chin and a green badge in the corner of his windscreen, and he got out to meet her, which she had not expected either, and walked her round to the driver's side as if she might not find it on her own. "We'll just get you comfy first," he said. "Nobody drives well if they're not comfy." He showed her the bar under the front of the seat, and she bent and found it with her fingers, a cold loop of metal, and pulled it up, and the seat slid forward under her with a jolt that made her catch her breath, and he said that was it, that was the way, keep going till your foot can push the left pedal right down to the floor without your leg going straight. She kept going. The runners clicked under her, notch by notch. It seemed to her a very great distance for a seat to travel. Then the lever on the side for the height, and the other lever to bring the back upright, and the mirrors, the inside one first, which he told her to set so that she could see the whole of the back window in it and nothing of herself, and she moved it with two fingers and caught her own eye in it all the same, a woman of sixty-seven in a navy coat with her lipstick on for no reason, and moved it again.
"Right," he said. "Now. The clutch."
She had known, of course, that there were three pedals. She had sat beside Terry in four cars and watched his feet without watching them, the way you watch a person's hands knitting, and she had thought, when she thought about it at all, that the left foot went down and the right foot went down and the car went. What Kamran described was a slower thing. With the engine running, he said, and first gear in, you bring the clutch up, slow, slow, slower than you think, and there's a point, you'll feel it, where the engine takes hold of the wheels. The note drops. The front of the car lifts, ever so slightly, like it's taking a breath. That's the biting point. You hold it there. You don't go past it. You let the handbrake off and you find a bit of gas and then you let it the rest of the way.
He made it sound like something that happened in the body of the car, and it did, she found, though the first six times she did not feel it at all. Her left foot came up and the engine coughed and the whole car shook itself once, hard, from front to back, like a dog coming out of water, and stopped, and the silence after it had a ringing in it, and the dashboard lit up with small orange pictures she did not understand. Her hands were tight on the wheel at ten to two. Her shoulders had gone up somewhere near her ears. "That's a stall," Kamran said, as if he were naming a bird. "Everybody stalls. Handbrake on. Neutral. Start her up again." On the seventh time she felt it: a change under her foot, not a sound so much as a thickening, the pedal pressing back against the ball of her foot with a new kind of resistance, and the bonnet in front of her lifting perhaps half an inch, and the engine's note going down, as he had said, as if it had settled to a job. She held it. Her calf trembled with the holding. The car stood there, wanting to go and not going, and she could feel it wanting through the pedal, through the seat, a faint steady pull at the base of her spine. "There," he said, quietly. "That's it. That's the bite. Now don't move."
She did not move. She sat with her foot on the edge of the thing for what might have been four seconds and seemed longer, her breath stopped high in her chest, and it came to her, in the way that a smell comes to you before you have named what it is, that she had felt this before, this exact pull, from the other seat, every time Terry pulled away from a junction: the slight lift of the car and the drop of the note, which she had taken all her life for the car's own business and had never once thought was a thing a foot was doing.
There were lessons on Tuesdays and Fridays, an hour each, forty pounds a time, paid in cash out of the savings account which had been in both their names and was now, the letter from the bank said, in hers. Kamran took her first round the industrial estate off Hessle Road on a Sunday morning, where there was nothing but shuttered units and a man walking a Staffordshire bull terrier, and then onto the estates, the long straight roads off Boothferry Road with cars parked down both sides, where she learned that the width of the Corsa was something she carried with her like a pair of shopping bags, and that she was always carrying it too far to the left. He did not grab the wheel. He had a brake on his own side, which she saw him use once, when a boy on a scooter came out from between two vans on Pickering Road, and she felt the car stop under her before her own foot had begun to move, and she sat afterwards with her hands in her lap and her heart going in her ears, and the boy looked at them over his shoulder and went on, and Kamran said, "Well, he's had his fright for the day," and gave her a mint from the packet in the door pocket, and waited, and did not say anything else until she had put her hands back on the wheel herself.
He talked when she needed talking to and was silent when she did not, and it was some weeks before she understood that he could tell the difference from the side of her face. Mirror, signal, manoeuvre, he said, and then, when that had gone in, he said it less, and then not at all, and she found that her eyes were going to the mirror by themselves before her hand went to the indicator, the way her hand went to the light switch at the top of the stairs at home in the dark. He sat very still in the passenger seat. He sat with his hands loose on his thighs and his body turned a little toward her, and she was aware of him there, of his warmth in the small car on cold mornings and the smell of the mints and of some soap or cream with lemon in it, and she was aware, too, in a way that embarrassed her when she noticed it and that she did not much notice, that it was the first time since the winter that a man had sat this close to her for this long, eighteen inches off, breathing in the same small space; and that her body, which had not been asked about it, had taken it as a kind of comfort, as you take the warmth from a radiator in a waiting room without deciding to.
She did not tell him about the car in the drive. She did not tell anyone. Their son rang from Leeds on Sunday evenings and asked how she was managing and she said she was managing, and once he said that she ought to think about selling Dad's car, because a car that's sat doesn't do itself any good, Mum, the battery goes, and she said yes, she would think about it, and after he had rung off she went out and sat in it, in the passenger seat, and looked at the hollow in the other seat, and the battery had not gone, because when she pressed the fob the indicators still blinked their two blinks at her in the dark.
It was the reversing she could not do. She could do the roundabouts now, even the big one out at Hessle with the lorries coming off the A63, where her hands had gone cold on the wheel the first time and her right foot had pressed and lifted and pressed on the accelerator so that the car went round in a series of small lurches, like a person running for a bus in shoes too tight, and Kamran had said nothing at all until they were out the other side and then had said, "Third exit. That was the third exit. You took it." She could do hill starts on the slope by the old railway bridge. She could do the emergency stop, when he slapped the dashboard, without her heart doing anything worse than it did when the phone rang late at night. But when he had her pull up on the left on a quiet road behind the cemetery and told her that now she was going to reverse round the corner into the side road behind, keeping close to the kerb, her body would not arrange itself to do it.
"You've to turn round properly," he said. "Not just your head. All of you. Get your shoulder round. Put your left hand on the back of my seat if it helps. People feel daft doing it, but it's how you see."
She put her left hand on the back of his seat. The upholstery was rough under her palm, warm where his back had been against it, and her fingers were an inch or so from his shoulder, and she twisted her body round from the waist, her right hand alone on the wheel at twelve o'clock, and looked out through the back window at the corner and the kerb and the bins someone had left out on the pavement, and her neck pulled, and something in her lower back caught and held, and she brought the clutch up to the bite and felt the car begin to roll backwards, slowly, slower than walking, and the kerb came toward them in the back window, and she was turning the wheel the wrong way and then the right way, and it was then, with her face over her own shoulder and her hand on the back of a seat that was not hers, that she knew what she was doing, and whose arm this was.
He had always done it like that. In the car park at Morrisons, in the multi-storey in town at Christmas, into the drive at home in the dark with the headlights on the garage door: Terry, his left arm laid along the back of her seat, his hand behind her head, his whole long body turned round toward her to see out of the back, so that for the six or eight seconds it took to reverse the car into its space she had been held, more or less, without his ever meaning to hold her, in the crook of his arm, with the smell of his jacket at her ear. She had never thought of it as anything. It was how he reversed. And she had sat there, all those years, for all those seconds, with her face forward and her hands in her lap and his wrist behind her neck, and had not given a thought to the weight of the forearm along the seat-top, or the warmth of the hand not quite touching her hair, which she could feel now, exactly, in the place where it was not.
She stopped the car. She had brought it round the corner and into the side road, wide, too wide, with the back wheel a foot and more from the kerb, and she pressed the brake and put the handbrake on with a ratcheting pull, and sat. Her hand was still on the back of his seat. She took it away and put it in her lap. Her throat had closed up, low down, just above the collarbones, in a way she had come to know since February, a fist of something that would not be swallowed, and she looked out through the windscreen at a privet hedge and waited for it to go.
Kamran did not say anything about the kerb. He opened the door pocket and took out the packet of mints, and peeled one off, and held it out to her on the flat of his palm, the way you would hold a sugar lump out to a horse, and she took it, and they sat there for a little while behind the cemetery with the engine ticking over, while the mint went to nothing on her tongue.
"We'll do it again," he said, after a bit. "Same corner. You'll get it."
She did it again. She got it on the fourth go.
On the Friday before the test, which was booked for the middle of June at a time of morning she did not like, Kamran drove her home himself, which he did not usually do, and pulled up behind Terry's car in the drive and turned off the engine. He looked at it through the windscreen, the silver Focus under its dust, with the cord of the reading glasses showing faintly through the glass where it hung from the visor.
"That yours?"
"It was my husband's."
He nodded. He did not ask anything more. He said that she was ready, that she would be fine, that she should get a good night's sleep and have breakfast, because people forgot to have breakfast and then their hands shook. She got out. She stood on the drive and watched the white Corsa reverse out into Hotham Close, his left arm along the back of the empty passenger seat and his body turned to see, and drive off, and the red letters went away down the close with the telephone number on them, and the Simpsons' birch, which had finished its pollen weeks ago, moved its leaves a little in the air above the fence.
She did not go in.
She went to the Focus and pressed the fob, and the indicators blinked twice, and she went round to the driver's door, which she had never in her life opened, and opened it. The smell came out to meet her, of the seats warming in the late sun, and of dust, and very faintly, under that, of him; or of the car, which had become the same thing. She stood and looked at the seat. Then she got in, which was difficult, because the seat was so far back that she had to sit first on the edge of it and then lift her legs in after her one by one, and when she was in, her feet did not reach the pedals by some inches, they hung over the mat like a child's feet at a dinner table, and the wheel was a long way off, and the headrest was somewhere above the top of her head, and she sat in the hollow he had made, and it was too big for her everywhere.
She reached under the front of the seat. Her fingers found the bar, cold, and gritty with something, crumbs perhaps, a lifetime of crumbs from motorway sandwiches, and she held it.
She held it for some time. The close was quiet. A blackbird was going on somewhere in the Simpsons' hedge.
Then she pulled the bar up, and pushed with her heels against the floor, and the seat came forward under her with a jolt, and she let the bar go and it clicked into a notch, and she pulled it again and pushed again and it clicked again, and again, the runners chattering under her, the hollow in the cushion moving forward with her and becoming, as it moved, only the shape of a seat, until her left foot could press the clutch flat to the floor without her leg going straight. She brought the back of the seat upright. She reached up, with both hands, to the headrest, and pressed the buttons on its posts, and pushed it down. She took the reading glasses off the visor and folded them and put them in the glove box, on top of the service book and the ice scraper and the tin of travel sweets with three left in it. She moved the mirror with two fingers until she could see all of the back window and none of herself.
Then she put the key in and turned it, and the engine caught at the second try, coughed, and ran; and she put her foot on the clutch and the car into first, and brought the clutch up, slow, slow, slower than she thought, until under her foot she felt it thicken, and the note drop, and the bonnet in front of her lift a little, as if the car were taking a breath, and held it there.
The Focus stood on the drive with the engine running, wanting to go, and not going, and she sat with her foot at the bite and her two hands on his wheel at ten to two, and the pull of it came up through the seat into the small of her back, steady, and she let it.
THE END
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