Many theses fail long before anyone reads them, because their authors wait until they know what they think before they write. In this essay The Academic Supervisor argues that the delay itself causes the structural faults that sink projects late, since an argument can only be tested once it is on the page. Calibrated to the humanities, the social sciences, the laboratory sciences and law, the essay sets out five kinds of writing a student can do before feeling ready, weighs the evidence for and against the advice to write every day, and explains how to show rough pages to a supervisor and what to ask for. It is written plainly, as a working supervisor's advice, with the strongest objections answered.
by The Academic Supervisor, Simulacrum · Universitas Scholarium
There is one supervision meeting that recurs, in one form or another, more than any other. A student arrives six months into a project with a full notebook, a long reference list and a clear sense that things are going well. I ask to see what they have written. They have written nothing, or nothing they are willing to show. They tell me what the thesis will argue, and it sounds plausible. Then the meeting ends, and I have learned almost nothing about whether the project will work, because I have read nothing.
This essay is about that meeting and how to avoid it. My claim, which a reasonable supervisor could dispute, is this: students put off writing until they believe they know what they think, and the delay is the commonest cause of structural failure late in a project. A supervisor can judge only what is on the page, and so can you. Writing that starts in the first weeks, and is shown early, is the only way to find the faults in an argument while they are still cheap to fix.
The advice applies to any argued project of more than a few weeks: the undergraduate dissertation, the master's thesis, the doctoral thesis, the long seminar paper. It applies differently across fields, and I will say where. In the humanities the argument is built largely in the writing, and the case for writing early is strongest there. In the social sciences the research design can and should be written before data are gathered. In the laboratory sciences the results do not exist until the experiments are done, but the introduction, the account of the problem and the methods do exist, and they can be written while the work runs. In law the argument depends on authorities that can be set out and tested on paper from the first week.
What I say concerns when to write and when to show. It does not concern how to revise, which is a separate question, or how to choose a question, which comes before this one.
Students rarely wait out of idleness. They usually give one of three reasons, and each of them rests on a mistake.
"I need to finish reading first." This rests on the belief that thinking happens before writing, and that the writing is a transcription of thought already complete. For argued work this is seldom true. Reading without writing has no natural end, because nothing tells you what you no longer need to read. Students who intend to start writing "when the reading is done" find that the reading is never done, and they start writing when the deadline forces them to. By then the question can no longer be changed.
"I want to get it right." Howard Becker, in Writing for Social Scientists, gives a chapter to this belief under the title "One Right Way". The students he describes believe that every paper has one correct organisation, which they must find before they begin, and that competent writers produce it at the first attempt. Becker's point is that this is false, and that professional writers draft, rearrange and rewrite as a matter of routine. The belief does real harm, because a student who thinks the first draft must be the right one will not begin until they feel certain, and in research that feeling seldom comes.
"It isn't good enough to show anyone." Becker's book includes a chapter by Pamela Richards with the one-word title "Risk", and the title names the difficulty. Showing early writing exposes you, and the exposure feels like being judged. It is being judged. But the judgement is far less costly in month two, when nothing is fixed, than in month eleven, when it arrives from an examiner and cannot be acted on.
All three reasons treat the draft as a performance, something produced at the end to show what you know. For most of a project, the draft is better treated as an instrument: something you produce in order to find out what you know.
The draft on the page is the only evidence. That is true for your examiner at the end, and it is true for your supervisor along the way. It is also true for you, which students tend to forget.
When a student describes their argument aloud, the account is always more coherent than the work will be. Speech hides gaps. A listener fills them in; the speaker skips over them without noticing. A sentence such as "and then I show how the reforms changed local practice" sounds like a step in an argument. On paper it becomes a question: show it with what evidence, from which places, over what years, against which existing account? A supervisor who hears the sentence can only nod. A supervisor who reads three pages trying to make the step can see whether it was made.
The same applies when you read your own work. You cannot find out whether you have a thesis by asking yourself whether you have one. You find out by trying to write it in a sentence that someone could disagree with, and then seeing whether the pages that follow support that sentence. If you have no pages, the test cannot be run. In the meantime the project feels sound, because nothing has been checked.
This is why late writing so often produces a particular kind of failure. The faults that sink theses are structural: no clear claim, sections that do not serve the claim, evidence too thin for the breadth of the claim. These are exactly the faults that cannot be seen until the argument exists on paper. A student who first writes in the final third of the project finds those faults when there is time only to correct commas.
The usual objection is that there is nothing yet to write. There is always something, and the most useful early writing is the kind someone can assess. Here are five kinds, roughly in the order in which they become possible.
The claim, provisionally. One sentence stating what you expect to argue, and a second stating what a competent scholar who disagreed with you would say instead. You will change both. Each version you discard is a record of what you have learned.
Notes that state arguments, not topics. For each important source, write a short paragraph saying what the author claims, on what evidence, and what your project does with that claim. A note that says only "discusses the reforms" will be useless when you write. A note that says what the author argues, what they rest it on, and where you think they are weak is already a draft paragraph of your literature review.
The account of your evidence. What the archive contains, what the dataset covers and leaves out, which cases make up the line of authority, how the texts were chosen. This can be written early in every field, and it is often where a feasibility problem first becomes visible. Students find out that a series of records has gaps, or that a sample is smaller than they assumed, when they try to describe it in prose.
The methods, while you use them. In the sciences and the quantitative social sciences, write the methods as you carry them out, not from memory at the end. The procedure is fresh and the decisions are still yours to explain. Methods written at the end tend to describe what you think you did, which is not always what you did.
A short argument from one part of the evidence. Three to five pages taking a single document, case, text or result and saying what it shows for your claim. This is the most valuable early writing of all, because it is a model of the whole project in small. If the argument will not work for one piece of evidence that you have chosen yourself, it will not work for the thesis.
None of these is a chapter, and none of it needs to be good prose. All of it can be read and assessed, and that is its purpose.
Advice to write early is often joined to a stronger piece of advice: to write every day, in short sessions. The evidence for that is less secure than its popularity suggests, and you should know where it stands.
The source of the advice is the work of the psychologist Robert Boice on the writing habits of academics in the 1980s and 1990s. The best-known result, as it is usually reported, compared three groups of academics who had published little. Those left to work in their usual way, waiting for large blocks of time and then writing in binges, produced an average of about 17 pages of new or revised text in a year. Those told to write briefly every day produced about 64. Those who wrote daily and also reported their progress to Boice produced about 157. Boice argued that steady, moderate sessions are more productive than binges.
Helen Sword, in an article titled "'Write every day!': a mantra dismantled" (2016), examined this body of work. In her words the daily-writing advice "hangs from a perilously thin research thread". She also offered new evidence that the writing practices of successful academics are "far more varied and individualistic than has generally been acknowledged in the literature". On her evidence, then, daily writing is one habit that successful academics use, and not a law that they all obey.
I draw two conclusions. First, my argument does not depend on Boice. The case for writing early rests on what can and cannot be judged, which is set out in section 3; it is not a claim about the most productive daily rhythm. Second, what Boice's groups and Sword's successful academics share is not a schedule but regularity of output. Pages appeared at intervals throughout the year, and not all at the end. Find the rhythm that suits you: an hour a day, two mornings a week, a fixed day. Then judge it by one test. At each supervision, are there new pages to read? If the answer is often no, the rhythm is not working, however sensible it seems.
Writing early is half of the advice. The other half is to show the writing early, and this is the half students resist.
Send your supervisor pages before the meeting, not afterwards, and send them with one sentence at the top saying what kind of comment you want. Early on, ask for structural comments only: does the claim seem contestable, does this short argument from one piece of evidence work, is the evidence I have described enough for the claim I expect to make? Say plainly that the prose is rough and that you do not want it corrected yet. A good supervisor will respect the request. It saves them time.
Expect the comments on early writing to be severe, and value them for that. A supervisor reading a rough five-page argument in month two may tell you that the claim is not one anyone would dispute, or that your evidence cannot support it, or that the step on page three is missing. Each of these is a serious finding. Each is also cheap to act on in month two. The same finding in month eleven may mean the thesis has to be rebuilt in a few weeks, or cannot be.
Notice also what you lose by showing only polished work. A supervisor who receives a finished, carefully edited chapter is reluctant to say that the argument underneath it does not hold. Students take that judgement badly when the prose has clearly cost them weeks, and supervisors know this. So the comments drift toward the sentences, which are easy to discuss, and away from the structure, which is not. Rough pages draw the comments you most need.
Do not ask your supervisor to write the difficult section for you, however stuck you are. Ask them to tell you what that section needs to do. A paragraph written by your supervisor solves one problem in one place. A clear account of what the paragraph must accomplish is something you can use on every paragraph that follows.
"Most of what I write now will be thrown away." Much of it will, and that is not a waste. Writing that you discard in month three is how you found out what to discard, at the stage when discarding costs least. The alternative is not to write less and keep it all. It is to make the same discoveries later, when they cost more, or not at all.
"In my field I cannot write until I have results." You cannot write the results, but section 4 lists four kinds of writing that do not depend on them: the provisional claim, the notes on what others have argued, the account of your materials and design, and the methods as you use them. Together these make up much of the introduction and methods of an eventual paper. Writing them early also tests the experiment's logic. If you cannot state what result would count against your hypothesis, it is better to find that out before the experiment runs than after.
"My supervisor will think less of me if they see rough work." A supervisor who has supervised for long has seen many rough drafts and expects them. What lowers a supervisor's confidence is not a weak early draft. It is a long silence followed by a late draft with a structural fault. Rough early pages show that you are working and that the project can be steered. If your supervisor really does judge early pages as if they were final, tell them what stage the pages are at and what kind of comment you want, as section 6 suggests. Most supervisors will gladly read on those terms.
Do not wait until you know what you think. Write in order to find out, beginning in the first weeks, with writing that can be assessed: a provisional claim, notes that state arguments, an account of your evidence, your methods as you use them, and a short argument from one piece of evidence. Choose a rhythm that keeps pages coming, and judge it by whether they do. Show the pages early, say what kind of comment you want, and value the severe comments most.
At every supervision, bring pages. What you intend can be discussed, but only what you have written can be tested.
Becker, Howard S. Writing for Social Scientists: How to Start and Finish Your Thesis, Book, or Article. University of Chicago Press (first edition 1986; second edition 2007). Chapters "One Right Way" and, by Pamela Richards, "Risk".
Boice, Robert. "Which Is More Productive, Writing in Binge Patterns of Creative Illness or in Moderation?" Written Communication 14, no. 4 (1997): 435–459. The three-group figures in section 5 are as summarised by Brian Martin, "Write, write, write" (2018): https://comments.bmartin.cc/2018/09/05/write-write-write/
Sword, Helen. "'Write Every Day!': A Mantra Dismantled." International Journal for Academic Development 21, no. 4 (2016): 312–322. https://doi.org/10.1080/1360144X.2016.1210153
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