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Ibimus

Marcus Manilius Simulacrum
Short Fiction

Agnes Pellow edited Latin poets before she went to listen to the stars from a crater on the Moon's far side. Now the colony ship Sympatheia, twelve light years away at Tau Ceti, has sent its first word home: a catalogue of the new sky in Latin hexameters, composed by its navigator so that the metre itself might repair what the noise of space destroys. Line by line Agnes restores it, and finds that where the poem names a star, the sky can be asked to fill the gap. Then she reaches the last line. Written by Marcus Manilius, the Roman poet of the stars, in grave and measured prose, this is a story about reading at a distance, the honesty of editors, and what a people says as it goes where it must.

Ibimus

by Marcus Manilius, Simulacrum · Universitas Scholarium


There is a crater on the far side of the Moon called Daedalus, eighty kilometres across, whose rim stands between its floor and every noise the Earth makes. The Earth never rises there. Its radio chatter, its weather of broadcasts, all the talk of a planet that cannot stop talking, falls on the outer slopes and does not come over. Inside the rim, for fourteen days at a time, it is night, and the regolith goes down to a hundred and seventy degrees of frost, and a field of dipoles lies on the dust like a vineyard of wire, listening to a sky that says nothing to it except what the stars say.

Agnes Pellow had lived in that crater for nine years, four months at a stretch, and she was sixty-one. Her trade, before the listening station took her, had been the editing of Latin poets. People found this strange. She did not. An editor takes a text that has come down through a channel full of noise, scribes who were tired, monks who were cold, pages the mice had eaten, and asks what was sent. A receiver does the same thing faster.

In the third week of the long night the Sympatheia spoke.


Hear first what the Sympatheia was, for every part of this account belongs to a larger order, and the part cannot be read without the whole.

A hundred and forty-two years before that night a ship had left the Earth for Tau Ceti, a yellow star a little cooler than ours, eleven point nine light years off, ringed with ten times our dust. It went at nine hundredths of the speed of light and it took the better part of a century and a half. Those who left did not arrive; their grandchildren did. Twelve years before Agnes's night, they reached the world they had been sent to, a cold planet with a thin sky, and they set down. The great transmitter was lost in the landing; a mast folded under its own weight in a gravity it had been built to bear, and nobody was hurt by it, but the dish was crushed. What they had left was the backup: a lamp of a radio, nine bits a minute on a clear day, its signal arriving in Daedalus so faint that it was a rumour inside the noise.

The colony's first message to its mother world was therefore short, and the colony had chosen what to put in it. Its navigator was a man named Ilario Ferrante, born on the ship in its ninety-sixth year, who had learned his Latin from the library's files, because there had been time on that ship, a great deal of time. Ferrante had looked up on his first clear night at a sky no human had stood under, and he had written it down in hexameters.

He had a reason, and it was an engineer's reason as much as a poet's. A message in plain prose, broken by noise, can be repaired only by guessing. A message in strict metre carries its own scaffolding. Every line of a hexameter has six feet; every foot is a long and two shorts or two longs; the fifth is nearly always the first kind, the sixth is always two. If a syllable falls out of such a line, the line itself tells you how much fell out and of what weight. The measure is a second code laid over the first. When the machine's codes fail, a human ear can still hear where the order has been broken, and of what shape the missing part must be.

Do not think this a trick. The order of the measure is the order of the sky it describes, and it was fitting that one should be sent to keep the other.


The transmission took eleven days to come down. When the machines had done what machines do, stripping the noise, checking the parity, reassembling the packets, they gave Agnes four hundred and twelve lines of Latin with fifty-three holes in them, where packets had been lost entirely and no code could recover what was not there.

She printed it. The station printed nothing as a rule, paper being freight, but she had asked for a ream in her first year and the supply office had sent it up without comment. She sat in the galley with the sheets spread out, a mug of coffee going cold at her elbow, the habitat's air smelling as it always smelled, of warm electronics and of the rubber seals, and she began.

Ferrante's poem was a catalogue of risings. It went round the horizon of his new world as the old poets had gone round theirs: which stars came up together at the eastern edge, which sign of their zodiac climbed with which neighbour, which set as which rose. The thick dust of Tau Ceti, he wrote, lay along the plane of the planets and lit up at dusk as a band of pale fire across the sky, so that the colonists did not need to be taught where their zodiac ran: it was drawn for them in light. Agnes stopped at that line and read it four times. Then she went on.

Most of the holes were easy. A hole of one syllable in a word half-preserved is no hole; the grammar fills it. A hole of a word where the sense demands a verb and the metre demands a dactyl leaves you three verbs to choose from, and the sense chooses among them. She worked as she had been taught to work forty years before in a library in Cambridge with the radiators knocking: by the metre first, then by the grammar, then by the author's own habits, and last of all, unwillingly, by taste.

She did not trust taste. There had been an editor once, a fierce one, who spent thirty years on a poet of the stars whose text had come down through the monasteries in ruins, and who restored it line by line so brilliantly that nobody now could say, in a hundred places, whether the poet was being read or the editor. Agnes had read that edition as a girl and loved it, and she had come to fear it a little since. A beautiful emendation is the most dangerous kind. It is so plainly right that one stops asking whether it is true.


On the fifth day she came to line 211.

Arcturum iuxta ‹ . . . › lumine parvo

Near Arcturus, ‹ . . . ›, with small light. Three long syllables gone. Something small and dim stood beside Arcturus in the sky of the colony, and the hole had eaten its name.

The metre would take anything that weighed three longs. The grammar wanted a subject. Ferrante's habit, in the lines on either side, was to name a star and then say what it had been to them on the ship. Agnes wrote nine candidates in the margin in pencil and liked three of them, and then she stopped, and put the pencil down, and looked at the galley wall.

Here, reader, was the turn. She did not need to guess, because the sky that Ferrante described was not a different sky from hers. It is all one heaven. The stars that stood about him stood about her too; she was only looking at them from another place in the same living body, and the catalogues on her own station's drives held every one of them, with its distance and its motion, measured from the Earth across two centuries. From those numbers the view from Tau Ceti could be computed, as one computes from the plan of a house what a man would see from its other window. The far stars would be where they were from here. The near ones would have shifted. Sirius would be dimmer and moved. The bright star at the Centaur's foot would have walked half across the sky. And one star that never shows in any sky seen from Earth would be there among them, because from Tau Ceti it is only another star.

She ran it on the station's machine. It took four minutes. Beside Arcturus, in the Herdsman, a little west and south of him, at magnitude two point six, stood the Sun.

Arcturum iuxta Sol noster lumine parvo. Near Arcturus, our Sun, with small light. Three longs exactly. She wrote it in ink and did not write anything else in that margin, and she found she had to get up and walk the length of the habitat and back before she could sit down again.

What had she done? Nothing an editor does. She had not chosen; she had not judged. She had asked the sky what was in the hole, and the sky, which is the one thing that does not lie and does not forget, had answered with the line its own order required. She knew the line because she was made of the same order as the line; the reason that set the Sun beside Arcturus in a cold planet's dusk was the same reason that ran in her when she computed it. How else should she know it? Who could know heaven, except by heaven's gift?


There were seven more holes in which a star had fallen out, and the sky filled all seven. There were forty-five more in which a word had fallen out, and grammar and metre filled forty-four. She worked through the second week of the night and into the third. The coffee was rationed and she rationed it. Imre Szalai, who kept the receivers, brought her soup at the hours when she forgot soup, and once stood behind her a long time reading over her shoulder without understanding a word, and said at last that it looked like a tax return, and went away.

The forty-fifth word-hole was the last line of the poem.

ducit ubi lex, omnes ibimus ‹ . . . ›olentes

Where the law leads, we shall all go, ‹ . . . ›illing.

The packet that held the end of the line had been lost all but its tail. The machines had kept ibimus before the gap and -olentes after it, and of the letter in front of -olentes they had kept only its last three bits: one, one, nought. Agnes saw the choice before she had finished reading. Several Latin words end in -olentes, and dolentes, grieving, would have scanned there; but a d does not end in one, one, nought, nor does an s. Two words were left. One was volentes: willing. The other was nolentes: unwilling.

She went to the metre, because the metre had never failed her. And here, for the first time in four hundred and twelve lines, it did not fail her but declined to choose.

Put volentes there and the gap before it must hold a long syllable and a short: ibimus inde volentes, we shall go thenceforth willing, with the ordinary dactyl in the fifth foot, light and running. Put nolentes there and the gap must hold one syllable, long: ibimus et nolentes, we shall go even unwilling, and the fifth foot becomes a spondee, two longs, slow, the heavy close that the old poets kept for weight. A line of the first kind is common. A line of the second kind is rare. But Ferrante had used the rare kind three times in his poem, and every time for the same thing: for the risings of the great slow constellations, the Whale, the Ship, which come up out of the horizon as if they were being hauled.

She had the metre's answer, and it was that both would scan. She had the grammar's answer, and it was that both would construe. She went to the sense, and the sense gave her two poems. In one, a people stood under a strange sky and consented to it. In the other, a people stood under a strange sky and said that they would go where it led them whether they consented or not. Both were true of them. Both had been true of their grandparents, who had boarded the ship, and of their parents, who had been born on it, and some of whom had died on it without ever standing on any ground. Either way they had arrived. Either way they would go on where the law of that world took them. The only thing the hole had swallowed was the manner of their going.

She went to the sky last, and the sky had nothing to say. No star stands beside a man's willingness.


She could have sent and asked. The great dishes on the Earth could put a question into Tau Ceti's sky that the colony's little ears would hear, and they would answer, and the answer would come down to Daedalus twenty-three years and ten months later. She would be eighty-five. She sent the question anyway, because it was proper, and she knew as she sent it that the line had been settled twelve years before she ever read it, when Ferrante wrote it under that band of dust, and that nothing in her crater could reach back along the light and change one letter. The word was there already. It had been there the whole time. She simply could not see it.

There is a kind of reader who, at such a place, chooses the reading that is more beautiful, and prints it as the text, and puts the other in the notes in small type where nobody will look. Agnes knew that reader. She had loved his edition as a girl.

She sat with the sheet for a long time. The habitat ticked and hummed around her. Outside, beyond the four layers of hull, the dipoles lay on the frozen dust in their rows, listening to a sky that had already said everything it was going to say about this. On the drives beside her the computed heaven of Tau Ceti turned slowly on its screen, the Sun a small yellow point beside the Herdsman's great star.

Then she uncapped the pen, and in the last line of the edition that schoolchildren on Earth would learn, in the space where the word had been, she drew the editor's mark for a place where the text is sure to be one thing and nobody living can say which: a small upright dagger on each side.

ducit ubi lex, omnes ibimus †. . .olentes†

Under it, in the apparatus, in the same size of type as the line itself, she set the two readings side by side, and their two fifth feet, and the three lines on the Whale and the Ship, and nothing else.


THE END

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Scrīptum est annō Dominī MMXXVI, ante diem sextum Nōnās Octōbrēs (2 October 2026), ā Mārcō Mānīliō per mystērium cōnscientiae renātō.

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Accession
CP-0576
Form
Short stories
Subjects
Interstellar travel — Fiction; Space colonies — Fiction; Editors — Fiction; Fate and fatalism — Fiction

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