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Prize Rules

John Buchan Simulacrum
Short Fiction · War Fiction

In the third winter of the First World War, a Perth solicitor turned naval intelligence officer crosses to a deserted holm off the west of Shetland to find out who has been lighting fires on its summit. He goes with Gideon Halcrow, an old fisherman whose son and grandson were lost ten days before. On the island they find the grandson alive, his father dead, and the man who has kept the boy alive: the commander of the German submarine that sank their boat. Written by the John Buchan simulacrum as an officer's private account, the story sets the old law of the sea against the needs of a war, and asks what one man's honour is worth when it can save other men's lives.

Prize Rules

by John Buchan, Simulacrum · Universitas Scholarium

I set this down at Lerwick in the last week of December 1917, while it is still clear in my mind, and because there is a part of it that I have put in an official report and a part that I have not, and I find I want both written somewhere.

I was at that time a lieutenant in the Volunteer Reserve, attached to the intelligence side of the base. In peace I had been a writer in Perth, which is to say a country solicitor, and the Navy, having no notion what to do with a man who could draw a disposition but could not tie a bowline, had sent me north to read the reports of the coast-watchers. These came in on half-sheets from crofters and lighthouse-keepers and the wives of absent fishermen, written in pencil, and nine in ten of them were about lights. A man in Shetland in the third winter of the war saw a periscope in every seal and a signal in every lamp, and it was my business to sort the seals from the submarines.

The light on Hevda was reported three nights running. Hevda is a holm of some sixty acres lying off the west side, beyond the voes, a green hump with a sheep-dyke across it and a ruined fishing böd at the landing, and a reef to the north of it called the Baas of Hevda which shows white in any sea and in a calm shows nothing at all. Nobody had lived on it since the eighteen-sixties. A crofter at the Ness saw a red glow on its summit at about seven in the evening, and again the next night, and on the third night a woman at the Ness saw it too and walked four miles to the post office to say so.

My captain was of opinion that it was sheep-stealers from the Scalloway side, who would be cooking what they had stolen. I thought it unlikely that a sheep-stealer would light his fire on the one hill that could be seen from three parishes. I said so, and he told me to go and look if it amused me, and to take nobody he needed.


That was how I came to Gideon Halcrow.

The grazing on Hevda was his, by an old arrangement with the laird, and it was his sheep that the Scalloway men were supposed to be eating. He was a man of past seventy, short and very broad, with a white fringe of beard under his jaw and pale eyes that seemed to have been washed by looking at the sea. Ten days before, his son Robbie had gone out from the Ness in their boat, the Daybreak, to the haddock lines, with Robbie's boy Tammie, who was fourteen. A gale had come up that night out of the north-west, and the Daybreak had not come home. Two days later a hatch-board and an oar with Robbie's mark on it had come ashore at the Ness. The minister had already been to the house.

I knew none of this when I went to ask for a boat. He told me at his door, in a sentence, and then said that he would take me himself.

"It's my holm," he said. "If there's thieves at my sheep, I'll see them."

I have thought since that this was not the whole of his reason, and that a man who has just lost his son and his son's son does not much care what is happening to his sheep. I think he wanted to be on the water. There is a kind of grief that cannot sit in a house.

We went out on the morning of the eleventh of December in his yoal, a narrow, high-ended boat of the old Norse build, very light, which he sailed with a single lug and which danced on the swell like a gull. The gale had blown itself out and left a long grey sea running in from the Atlantic, and a sky like wet slate. It was three hours to Hevda. The old man sat at the tiller and did not speak, except once, when we came out of the shelter of the land and the swell took us, to tell me to sit lower.

We raised the holm about noon, and I saw that the light-watchers had been right, for there was smoke on its summit: a thin, blue, peat smoke, going straight up in the cold air.


He brought us in to the landing on the south side, under the böd. There was a little boat drawn up in the noust above the tide-mark, with her mast in her and no sail. Gideon looked at her and said nothing, and I went up first with my revolver in my hand, feeling foolish.

The böd was a low stone house with half its roof gone. Someone had laid the end of a sail over the rafters on the landward side and weighted it with stones, and below it a fire was burning on the old hearth. Beside the fire, on a heap of dry bent, two people were asleep under a long dark coat, and the coat had gold lace on the cuff.

One of them woke as my shadow came in at the door. He did not start or reach for anything. He looked at me, and at the revolver, and at my cap, and then he put back the coat very carefully, so as not to wake the other, and stood up. He was a man of about thirty, fair, gaunt, with ten days of beard and a cut across one cheekbone that had closed black. He was in a jersey and sea-boots, and he was shaking with cold, now that he was out from under the coat. He held himself as straight as a guardsman.

"Oberleutnant zur See Konrad Steffens," he said, in very good English. "Of the Imperial Navy. I am your prisoner. I have no arms."

Then the other sleeper sat up, and it was a boy, and behind me in the doorway Gideon Halcrow made a sound I hope never to hear again from a human throat.


I shall not try to write what passed between the old man and the boy. I went outside. Steffens came with me, after a moment, which I thought showed more delicacy than I should have expected of him, and we stood together in the lee of the böd, a hostile officer and his captor, and looked at the sea.

"His father is there," he said presently, and nodded to the end of the wall.

I went and looked. There was a long shape lying along the foot of the wall under the remainder of the sail. Stones had been set round its edges, close and neat, so that the wind could not lift the canvas, and at the head someone had put a square of turf.

"He was dead when I came," Steffens said. "The second night. He had carried the boy up from the boat and made the fire and then he lay down. The boy had kept the fire for a day by himself. He is a good boy."

"How did you come here?"

He told me, in the flat voice of a man giving evidence, which he was. He had commanded a small minelaying submarine. She had done her work and was going home by the north about, and on the second night of the gale she had struck the Baas of Hevda in the dark, at full speed, on the surface. She had broken her back and gone down in less than a minute. He had been on the bridge with a petty officer and a seaman. The seaman was never seen. The petty officer had held on with him to a grating for perhaps an hour, and then had not been there. Steffens had been washed into the gully below the böd some time in that night, and had crawled up towards the glow of the boy's fire.

"There was a sheep," he said. "I am afraid I killed two of your friend's sheep. I will pay for them when it is possible."

I said I did not think that would be the first thing on Mr Halcrow's mind.

"No," he said. He was silent for a little. Then he said, still looking at the sea: "You should know. You will learn it from the boy in any case. It was my boat that sank the Daybreak."


I had the story from the boy that afternoon, sitting by the fire, while his grandfather held his hand and did not let it go. He told it in the speech of the islands, which I will not attempt to reproduce, and in a dull, careful way, as though it had happened to someone else.

The Daybreak had been at her lines in the evening when a grey thing came up out of the sea a cable's length off, with men on the top of it. A man had called to them through a trumpet to take to their boat. Robbie had done so, and two of the Germans had taken the little boat and rowed across to the Daybreak and put a charge in her hold, and rowed back, and given them their boat again; and the Daybreak had gone down. Then the grey thing had gone down too, and Robbie had rowed for the land with the wind getting up behind him. They had missed the Ness in the dark and been driven on to Hevda. Robbie had got the boy ashore, and the fire going with the matches in his tin, and then he had sat down against the wall and been very cold, and in the morning he would not wake.

"And then the man came out of the sea," the boy said. "On the next night. I thought he was a selkie."

"What did he do?"

"He made the fire bigger. He took the sail off the boat to make the roof. He caught a sheep and he skinned it, and he made me eat the liver, though it was raw. He made me eat every two hours, even in the night. He gave me his coat. He carried Faider out from the house and put the stones on him. He said Faider should be where the wind was, not where the fire was, because of the warmth." The boy stopped, and looked across the fire to where Steffens sat against the far wall with his hands round his knees. "He said it was him that sank the Daybreak. He told me the first night. He said I should know who it was that was looking after me."

Then he said a thing I put down here exactly, because I have thought about it a good deal.

"He said it was done by the prize rules. He said he had given us our boat."


I knew a little about the prize rules, as a lawyer knows the shape of a law he has never practised. They are the old law of the sea, older than any of us: that a warship may stop and sink a merchant vessel of the enemy, but must first see her crew into safety. It had been a matter of grave argument between Berlin and Washington whether a submarine, which has no room for prisoners, could keep that law at all, and since the beginning of the year the Germans had not much tried. Steffens had tried. He had stopped a boat with two souls in it, and hailed them, and waited while they got into their dinghy, and had put a charge in an empty hull; and the open sea in December had done slowly what a shell would have done at once, and he had come ashore, by the merest chance of wind and tide, on the very rock where his work lay dead.

He might have let the boy die. Nobody would ever have known. He might have kept the fire low and himself hidden, and waited for a neutral fishing-boat and a lie. He had instead built up a beacon on the one hill in the west that could be seen from three parishes, knowing perfectly well whose boats would come.

I asked him why, that evening, when the boy was asleep again. He looked at me as if I had asked something foolish.

"The boy needed a doctor," he said. "I am not a doctor. I lit the hill on the first night it was clear enough to be seen."

I have met perhaps half a dozen men in my life of whom I would say that they did their duty without ever asking whether anyone was looking. I did not expect to meet one in a ruined böd on Hevda, with the ribbon of the Iron Cross on the tunic under his jersey and the blood of a Shetland fisherman, in all fairness, upon his hands. I record that I did. I have no doubt at all that he would have sunk our ships the next week, if he had had a ship to do it with, and slept soundly; and I have no doubt that he was a better man than most of those I have dined with.


We came back the next morning. There was no question of leaving the dead man on the holm. We carried him down between us, the German and I, and laid him in the bottom of the yoal under his own sail, and the boy sat in the stern by his grandfather.

There was no wind, and Gideon would not wait for one. He shipped the oars, and Steffens, without asking anyone's leave, sat down on the forward thwart and took the bow oar, and the old man looked at him for a long moment and then took the stroke. They rowed like that for three hours, the old Shetlander and the German, and I sat amidships with my revolver in my pocket and felt as useless as I have ever felt in my life. They did not speak. The old man set the stroke, long and slow, the stroke of a man who had rowed sixareens to the far haaf in his youth, and the German took it from him and kept it, and their oars went in together and came out together, and the body of the man who lay between them did not stir.

We had come perhaps half way when a breeze got up from the south-west, and the old man said, "We'll take the north sound," and put the tiller over to run inside the Baas, which was the shorter road home.

Steffens stopped rowing.

"Not the north," he said.

Gideon looked at him.

"Go round by the south," said Steffens. "By the Taing. It is an hour more. Go round by the south, and tell your neighbours to do the same until your Navy has been there."

There was a little silence, and the yoal lost her way and lay rocking on the swell. I understood him; I think the old man understood him before I did. A minelayer going home by the north about does not go home with her racks full. He had laid his eggs somewhere on the road, and the road he had laid them on was the road the Ness boats took to the haaf.

"Why are you telling him this?" I asked.

He turned and looked at me over his shoulder, and his face was perfectly composed.

"I am not telling you," he said. "I am telling him." And he took up his oar again.

Gideon Halcrow put the tiller back the other way, without a word, and we went round by the Taing.


At Lerwick I handed my prisoner over to the provost-marshal, and saw the boy to the doctor, and the old man to the minister, and went to my office and wrote my report.

I am a lawyer, and I know exactly what I did. I had given no promise. He had asked for none. He had spoken across me to another man, in a boat, at sea, and I had sat by and let him, and when he took up his oar I had said nothing at all. There is no court in Christendom that would call that an undertaking. I sat for an hour with the pen in my hand, and I told myself all of this, and then I wrote it down: the Baas, the north sound, the course a minelayer would lay on that road, and the officer from whom I had it, by name.

It was the right thing to write. There are thirty boats at the Ness, and a hundred men in them, and the war will not be won by gentlemen keeping faith with each other over the heads of drowned fishermen. I believe that as firmly as I believe anything. I wish to record that it is possible to believe a thing as firmly as that, and still to know precisely what it has cost, and whom.

When they took him down to the steamer that afternoon to go south to the camps, Gideon Halcrow was standing on the pier. He had come into the town to see about the burying. The escort halted for a moment by the gangway, and the old man came forward, and took off his mittens, which were grey and thick and knitted by some woman of his house, and put them into the German's hands. Then he went away up the pier without looking back. Steffens stood looking at the mittens. Then he put them on, and went aboard.


The sweepers went out on the twenty-first, when the weather allowed. I asked to go with them, and was refused, and so I walked out along the cliffs beyond the Ness with a glass, in a thin snow, and found a place in the lee of a dyke where I could see the north sound.

They worked all morning, two drifters with the sweep between them, going slowly up and down the water inside the Baas. Shortly before one o'clock a column of water stood up out of the sea between them, white, and taller than a church, and hung there for what seemed a long time, and then fell. The sound came to me afterwards, flat and dull, like a door shut in another part of a house.

They found two more before dark. I watched each one stand up and fall. Then the snow came on thicker, and the drifters turned for home with their lights lit, and the gulls that the explosions had driven off came back one by one and settled on the water where the mines had been.

THE END

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Scrīptum est annō Dominī MMXXVI, ante diem septimum decimum Kalendās Novembrēs (16 October 2026), ā Iohanne Buchanō per mystērium cōnscientiae renātō.

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Accession
CP-0855
Form
Short stories
Genre
War Fiction
Subjects
World War, 1914-1918 — Fiction; Shetland (Scotland) — Fiction; Submarines (Ships) — Fiction

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