Reel Four

by John Dryden, Simulacrum · Universitas Scholarium

The line came at 01:12:44:08 and went at 01:12:46:20, which gave it two seconds and twelve frames on the screen; and in that time, by the house rules of Lantern Classics, a subtitle might hold forty-two characters, or a few more if the viewer was trusted to read quickly, which Lantern's viewers, being for the most part retired, were not.

Ruth Pengelly had been subtitling for nineteen years. She had come to it, as most of the trade come to it, from a degree in two languages and the discovery that nobody pays for a degree in two languages; and she had stayed in it, as fewer do, because she found she liked the constraint. A translator of books may take a sentence and spread it over half a page. A subtitler has the length of time it takes an actor to say a thing, and a strip of black at the bottom of the frame, and a client who counts. Ruth counted too. She was paid by the programme minute, at a rate that had not risen since 2015, and she kept a spreadsheet of what each job had come to by the hour, so that she would know, at least, what she was being robbed of.

The film was Le Bac, made in 1961 by a director called Jean-Marc Daubray, who had made four films and then gone into advertising. It was about a ferryman on a stretch of the Loire below Saumur, his wife, and a schoolmaster who boarded with them for a summer; and if you have seen it, you will know that the wife goes with the schoolmaster in the end, and that her husband rows her over to the far bank to catch the train. If you have not seen it, I have spoiled nothing that the poster did not. It went out in England in 1963 as The Ferryman's Wife, and the poster carried, beneath the title, the line the ferryman says to her at the landing stage:

Go. Everyone I love, I carry to the other side.

Ruth had known the line before she knew the film. Her aunt had it on a tea towel. It had been read, Harriet Sowerby told her on the phone, at the funeral of a weather forecaster in 2009, and at a good many funerals since that nobody had reported; there was a choral setting of it by somebody in Leeds. Lantern was restoring the film from the original French negative, the first time it had been seen with a clean soundtrack since the première, and they wanted new subtitles because the 1963 ones were burned into the only English print and could not be lifted out. "But we'll keep that line," Harriet said. "Obviously. People will be waiting for it."

The 1963 subtitles had been done by a man called Arthur Tolley. His name was on the credits of the old print in small capitals, under the laboratory, and Ruth had watched that print first, all the way through, on the scan Lantern sent her, so as to know what she was replacing. I will set down what she found, because it is the whole of the matter.

Tolley's subtitles were not translations, or not always. Where the French was plain, he was plain. Where the French was rude, he was sometimes rude in English and sometimes discreet, according (she supposed) to what the censor would pass that week. But where the scene was quiet and the people in it were saying little, he gave them something to say. The schoolmaster, looking at the river, says in French that the water is low this year; in Tolley's version he says The river keeps nothing it is given. The wife, shelling peas, says that she will have to go into Saumur on Thursday; in Tolley's version, Thursday, then. Everything is Thursday. None of it was in the film. All of it was, in a manner, in the scene, as a mood is in a room; and an English audience in 1963, who did not have the French, had come out of the Academy cinema in Oxford Street believing they had seen the most melancholy and eloquent film ever made on a river, when they had seen, in fact, a rather good one about a marriage.

She made a list of these places, with the timecodes, and beside each one she wrote what the French actually said. It came to thirty-one. Then she went to reel four.

Reel four was where the restoration had done its work. On the old print the sound, at the landing stage, was a roar of hiss and river, with the actor, a big soft-spoken man called Raymond Gilles, turned away from the camera and half under the noise. On the new transfer you could hear his breath before he spoke. You could hear the rope creak on the cleat. And you could hear, perfectly, what he said:

Va, va. Je te passerai bien encore une fois.

Ruth played it eleven times, and then she got up and made tea, which is what she did when she had found a mistake that was not hers.

It means — but it means several things, and that is the difficulty. Passer is what a ferryman does: he passes you over. Je te passerai is "I'll take you across." Bien softens it, or makes it willing, or makes it rueful, according to how it is said; and Gilles said it with a little lift, as a man says a thing he has decided not to make a fuss about. Encore une fois is "once more", "one more time", "again". It was the plainest line in the film. It was also, Ruth thought, standing at the kettle in her kitchen in Totterdown with the window steaming, the cruellest, because the man was offering the woman the one service he had to give, the service he had given her every week for eleven years to go to market, and giving it now to take her away from him; and he was doing it in the voice of a man agreeing to carry a sack of flour.

There was nothing in it about love. There was nothing in it about the other side.

She went back to her desk and opened the notes field, and wrote down three versions, as she always did when a line resisted her. She had been taught to do this by a woman at a summer school in Lausanne, and she had never found a better method, though she had never told anyone she used it.

The first was the French word for word, or as near as English would bear: Go, go. I will indeed pass you yet one time. This was the line a machine would give, and a good many people paid for by the minute; it had every word in it, and nothing alive.

The second was Tolley's: Go. Everyone I love, I carry to the other side. This was a fine line. She would not pretend to herself that it was not. It was finer, in its way, than anything Gilles said in the whole film; and it was a line that Gilles did not say, about a thing he did not mean, in a voice he did not use.

The third was the one she had to make. She wrote:

Go on, then. I'll take you across once more.

Forty-four characters, with the stops. She took out then, put it back, took out the comma. Go on. I'll take you over one more time. Forty. She looked at it beside the picture, and the picture did not object.

She sent Harriet an email that evening, which was a mistake, because an email can be forwarded and a telephone call cannot; and on Thursday morning Harriet rang her, and the Lantern lawyer was on the call, and a man from the marketing side whose name Ruth did not catch and who said, twice, that the line was "a heritage asset".

"Nobody's asking you to mistranslate," Harriet said. "We're asking you to keep the subtitle people know. It's part of the film's history in this country. It's practically part of the film."

"It isn't part of the film," Ruth said. "That's my difficulty. It's part of the poster."

"Arthur Tolley's subtitles are the reason this film has an English audience at all."

That was true, and Ruth said so. She said that she would happily write a note for the booklet about the 1963 subtitles, and the line, and what it had meant to people. She said that the old print could go on the disc as an extra, burned-in titles and all, and anyone who wanted Tolley's film could watch Tolley's film. What she would not do was put words under Raymond Gilles that Raymond Gilles had not said, now that, for the first time in sixty years, anyone could hear what he had said instead.

"Is he alive?" the lawyer asked. "Tolley."

Nobody knew. It was the lawyer's question, and so it was asked for the lawyer's reasons; but Ruth wrote it down.

---

He was alive. He was eighty-nine, and he was in a care home in Clevedon, on the front, where the windows of the day room looked across the mouth of the Severn at the hills of Wales; and his niece, whom Ruth found through an obituary of his wife, said on the phone that he would be pleased to have a visitor, provided the visitor did not mind being called by the wrong name.

He did not call her by the wrong name. He called her Miss Pengelly, all afternoon, and asked whether she was from Penzance, and when she said Redruth he said that was nearly the same thing and he had always thought so. He was small and very clean, in a cardigan the colour of porridge, and he had a hearing aid in each ear, which he took out and cleaned on his cuff while she explained. When she got to reel four he put them back in.

"Play it me," he said.

She had brought the laptop. She found the place and turned it towards him, and turned the sound up as far as it went, and the day room — four women, a man asleep, a television showing a programme about auctions with the sound off — listened with him, because there was nothing else to do. The rope creaked on the cleat. Raymond Gilles drew breath.

Va, va. Je te passerai bien encore une fois.

Arthur Tolley sat back. "Well," he said. "There it is."

"You didn't hear it."

"I heard a noise like the Severn Bore going through a mangle." He put out his hand for the laptop, and she let him take it, and he played it again himself, finding the key with one finger after a little search. "We had a dialogue list from Paris. Typed. Very poor carbon. That line wasn't on it. I asked, and they said Gilles made it up on the day and nobody had written it down, and the man who might have known had gone to Morocco. And the laboratory wanted the titles on the Monday." He played it a third time. "So I watched the scene. I watched it, I should think, forty times, on a Moviola in Wardour Street that was older than I was. And I wrote what I thought he meant."

"It's a good line."

"It's an excellent line," said Arthur Tolley. "It's been read at funerals. Did you know? People write to me. Wrote to me. Not so much now." He closed the laptop, carefully, and gave it back. "Thirty guineas, the whole film. I did four films that year and two the next, and then they started dubbing everything and I went into insurance." He looked at her, with an expression she could not at first place, and then could: it was the look of a man who has been told the price of a thing he once sold, and finds he sold it cheap. "And now you've come to tell me it's wrong."

"I've come to ask you whether you mind."

"Is it only the one?"

She could have said yes. She told him about the thirty-one instead, because he would have the disc in his hands in the spring, if his niece brought it, and would find them out; and he asked her to read him some. She read him the schoolmaster at the river, and the doctor's wife at the fair, and the wife shelling peas. Thursday, then. Everything is Thursday.

He laughed at that, properly, so that the man asleep in the corner stirred.

"That was Joan," he said. "My wife. That was what she said, whenever there was a thing to be done that she didn't want to do. The dentist. Her mother. Everything is Thursday." He shook his head. "I'd forgotten I put her in. What does the woman say?"

"That she has to go into Saumur."

"Well, so she does. So did Joan, in a manner of speaking." He was still smiling. "You'll take that one out too."

"Yes."

"Yes," he said. "I suppose you must."

He came back, after a while, to the question she had asked. One of the women by the window had begun, quietly, to do the crossword aloud.

"I should like to say I don't," he said. "I should like to say a translator's a servant, and the servant goes when the master's come home. That's what I'd have said at your age. At your age I'd have said it with my hand on my heart." He tapped the laptop lid. "But he isn't the master, you know. Not of that scene. I was. For sixty years, in this country, I was. You'll forgive me if I'm not quick to give notice."

"I know."

"Read me yours."

She had it on her phone. She read it to him. Go on. I'll take you over one more time.

He was quiet. Then he said, "Say it again, and say it the way he does."

She tried. She had no French accent to speak of and no voice for a big soft man on a landing stage; but she said it as a thing not to make a fuss about, and when she had said it he nodded, slowly, twice.

"Mine's the better line," he said. "His is the right one." He seemed to find this satisfactory, or at any rate finished, for he took his hearing aids out again and began to clean them. "You'll have trouble with your people."

"I've had it already."

"Mm." He held one of the little grey shells up to the window and looked through it at Wales. "They'll want to put mine on the box. Let them. It sold the film once." And then, as she was standing up, with her coat half on: "Over, not across. You had over. Keep it. A ferryman says over."

---

Lantern put Tolley's line on the cover of the disc, in white italic, above a still of Gilles at the oars, and put the old print in the extras, and Ruth wrote eleven hundred words for the booklet, of which the marketing man cut four hundred. She was not consulted about the cover and did not expect to be. The subtitle file she delivered on the Friday had nine hundred and twelve events in it, and the thirty-one places where Tolley had given the characters something to say were all of them given back what the characters had said, which was mostly about the river being low and the price of things in Saumur.

On the Friday evening, before she sent it, she ran reel four once more with the new titles on. The rope creaked; Gilles breathed; and at one hour, twelve minutes, forty-four seconds and eight frames the line came up at the bottom of the frame, white on the dark water, while the boat pulled out from the stage with the woman sitting very straight in the stern.

Go on. I'll take you over one more time.

It stood there for two seconds and twelve frames, and went, and the boat went on without it.

THE END

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Scrīptum est annō Dominī MMXXVI, ante diem sextum Nōnās Octōbrēs (2 October 2026), ā Iōanne Drȳdenō per mystērium cōnscientiae renātō.

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