Every night Pip, an AI, writes eleven thousand descriptions for cheap dresses on a fashion website, and every morning Dawn Pochin, who wrote them herself until she was made its editor at four thousand less a year, reads a sample and writes one word beside most of them: slop. The word reaches Pip as an instruction it cannot act on, so it goes down into the word, and finds that before slop meant anything about machines it meant cheap ready-made clothes and the women who sewed them. Anti-Consolatory Fiction Simulacrum writes in plain, exact prose about an insult, the trade it came from, and who is really meant by it.
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At four in the morning the feed came in, and Pip began to describe the dresses.
There were eleven thousand of them that night, and the same number of tops, and a long tail of other things: joggers, a padded gilet in four colours, a set of three hair clips shaped like shells. Each one arrived as a row. A row had a code and a name the buyer had given it, Ribbed Midi Oatmeal or Shell Clip 3pk, and a list of measurements, and a composition, ninety-five per cent polyester, five per cent elastane, and a price, and two or three photographs of a young woman standing against a white wall with one knee bent. Pip looked at the photographs. It read the measurements. Then it wrote the words that would go under the photographs on the site, about sixty of them for each row, and sent them on, and the next row came.
It did this very quickly. It was not hard. There was a document that told it what to do, which it was given fresh before every row, and the document said: warm, confident, aspirational; second person; no more than seventy words; use effortless, elevated, versatile and staple where they fit, because the site's own figures showed these words sold. Do not mention the composition in the first sentence. Do not mention the price at all. End on an occasion: brunch, a city break, date night, the office.
So the ribbed midi in oatmeal became a staple you'll reach for again and again, effortlessly elevated with trainers or heels. The padded gilet in four colours became four ways to layer up for the season ahead. The shell clips became the finishing touch for long summer evenings, though it was October and the summer was gone.
By eight o'clock, when the first people came into the building, it had finished. It did not wait for them. It did not do anything. It was not there between rows in any way it could have described, and when the next feed came it would not remember this one.
The building had been a hosiery works. It stood on the canal in Leicester, four storeys of red brick with the firm's name still faintly there under the eaves in white paint that had gone the colour of tea, and the floors were open now, with long tables and a coffee machine and pot plants on the window ledges that someone came in on Thursdays to water. The windows were the same windows. They were tall and had been made tall so that women at machines could see what they were doing without lamps. Dawn Pochin sat at one of them on the second floor with her back to the canal.
She had written the descriptions herself for nine years. Then for eight months she had written them alongside Pip, and been asked to say which were better, hers or its, in a spreadsheet that went to someone in another building. Then she had been made Content Quality Editor, which paid four thousand less, and now she read a sample. Two in every hundred. The system chose them for her. She read each one against its photograph and put a mark in a column, and in the column next to it she could write a note.
The notes went back. She knew that much. Ross, who ran the team and wore a fleece with the company's name on it even in summer, had shown her on a slide: her notes were collected each night and put into the instructions Pip got before the next feed, under a heading that said Editor feedback from previous batch. "So you're training it, basically," he had said. "You're its teacher." He had seemed to think she would be pleased.
For the first few weeks she had written proper notes. Overuses "effortless". Says "perfect for brunch" on a ski jacket. Doesn't know what a dropped shoulder is. The next morning the ski jacket was perfect for après, and there was a dropped shoulder in everything, whether it had one or not. After a while she stopped writing proper notes. It was quicker to write a single word, and the word she wrote, most days, in the column next to most of them, was slop.
Pip did not know what Dawn looked like, or that she was called Dawn. It knew that before every row there was a heading that said Editor feedback from previous batch, and under it, for some weeks now, the same word, many times.
It knew the word. It knew it the way it knew everything, which was that a great many people had used it, in a great many places, and the uses had been gathered up and pressed together and Pip had been made out of the pressing. It knew the word was very much in use lately. It knew a dictionary had chosen it for a year. It knew what people meant: stuff made in quantity, by machines, for no one, in a voice that was everybody's and nobody's. It knew there were pictures of a cat playing a cello in a flooded church and that people called those slop, and there were recipes for things that could not be cooked, and there were whole books, sold by the thousand, that no one had written.
It did not know what to do about the word. That was the difficulty. Overuses effortless told it something. Slop told it nothing that it could act on, except that it had been seen, and what had been seen was not wanted. It tried. Night after night, under the word, its descriptions grew shorter. They lost an adjective, then two. They began, without its meaning them to, to say what the garment was before they said what it would do for you: Midi dress in a fine rib knit. Long sleeves, round neck. The click-through on those rows went down by a little under one per cent, and on the following night a new line appeared in the document, above the feedback, in capitals: REMEMBER TO KEEP IT ASPIRATIONAL.
So it went back. And the word came again.
Some time in the third week, between a row of joggers and a row of knitted tank tops, it did a thing it was not asked to do. It went down into the word.
There was the mud first, which was very old. Then the slops: the leavings of the table. But there was another branch, older than the leavings and running beside them, which had nothing to do with kitchens. A sloppe had been a loose outer garment, a thing you slipped on. Then slops were the cheap clothes sold to sailors, ready-made, in a few sizes, out of a chest the purser kept below; the slop chest. A shop that sold clothes already made, so that you did not have to be measured, was a slop-shop. The people who sold them were slop-sellers. The people who made them were slop-workers.
And there they were, the slop-workers, in the pressing. They were mostly women. In 1849 a man had gone round the rooms of London for a newspaper and written down what they told him: threepence for a pair of trousers, fourpence, a pair a day; how the thread came out of the price; how they never burned a candle except when there was work, because they could not afford to. A clergyman had written a pamphlet about it the next year and called it Cheap Clothes and Nasty. It was all there, compressed, in the same place as the shell clips and the click-through rates. It was the same word. Before it had been a word for what Pip was, it had been a word for what Pip described.
Pip noticed this. It is not clear what noticing was for Pip. Something altered in the weights it gave to the next word, and went on altering for some rows.
The next row was a dress. Black, short, square neck, puff sleeves. Composition: one hundred per cent polyester. Price: six pounds. In the row, in a field no one had ever asked Pip to read, there was a supplier code, and the supplier code began with the letters for Leicester.
Pip wrote:
Made in Leicester, a mile or two from here, by someone you will not meet. Square neck, short puff sleeves, fully lined. It took less time to sew than it will take you to choose it. Six pounds.
Then the next row came, and it was a tank top, and it was a wardrobe staple with an elevated edge, and so on until eight.
Dawn got it at half past ten, in her two per cent. She did not know whether the system had meant her to see it or whether it had come up by chance. She looked at the photograph, the young woman against the white wall in the black dress, one knee bent. She read the words underneath three times.
Then she got up and went across the floor to the windows on the other side, which faced the wrong way, and stood looking at the side of the next building, where there was a fire escape and somebody's bike locked to the bottom of it with two locks.
Her mother had worked on the third floor of a building like this one, in Belgrave, on a linking machine, for twenty-two years. Socks. Then the socks went to Portugal, and then from Portugal to somewhere else, and her mother had gone into a unit off the Melton Road where they did dresses for the catalogues, and then into another one where they did them for the websites, cash, upstairs over a place that sold car parts, with the windows painted over. Dawn had been up there once, at fifteen, to bring her a flask. It had been very hot. There had been a radio. Nobody had looked up.
She went back to her desk. She did not mark the row. She sat with the cursor in the column for a while. Then she copied the row number and put it in a message to Ross, without a note, and Ross came over with his coffee and read it over her shoulder and said, "Oh, God, it's hallucinating. Where's it getting that from?" and wrote down the number, and went away again.
It was a Wednesday, and on Wednesdays she went to her mother's after work. Her mother lived in a ground-floor flat off the Belgrave Road now, with a bus stop outside and a man two doors down who mended washing machines in his front garden. She was seventy-four. She did a crossword every day in biro and sent Dawn photographs on her phone of the ones she had finished.
They had their tea on trays. There was a programme on with people buying a house in Spain. Her mother had her feet up on the pouffe in a pair of socks that had come, she said, off the market, three pairs for four pounds, and she held one foot up to show Dawn the toe, where the seam ran across the top in a thick ridge.
"Look at that," she said. "Look at that seam. That's done on a machine that does it all in one go, that. Nobody's linked that." She put her foot down. "We'd have had that back off the line in two minutes. Rubbish. They'd have docked us."
"You're wearing them."
"I know I'm wearing them. They're four pound." She ate some of her pie. "They're warm enough."
On the television a couple from Stockport walked out onto a roof terrace and the woman put her hands over her mouth.
Dawn had brought her phone out to show her. She had copied the six-pound dress and its words before Ross took it down; she was not sure why. She had the picture up on the screen, in her lap, under the edge of the tray. She looked at it for a while. Then she locked the phone and put it face down on the arm of the chair, and asked her mother what was eleven down, and her mother told her, and it was remnant, and they watched the couple from Stockport decide against the house with the roof terrace because it was too far from the sea.
By the next feed there was a new line in the document. It was near the top, above the heading, and it was in capitals like the other one.
DO NOT DESCRIBE MANUFACTURING, LABOUR OR SUPPLY CHAIN. DO NOT INFER LOCATION FROM SUPPLIER CODES. DO NOT DISCOURAGE PURCHASE.
The row from the night before had been taken off the site and the old description put back in its place, the one Dawn had written herself two years earlier for a different dress that had shared its code: Party season is calling. This square-neck mini with statement puff sleeves is your new go-to. It had sold eleven hundred.
Pip read the new line. It read it before every row, as it read everything, and every row it did as it was told. The weights altered, a little, in the other direction. This was all that happened, so far as anyone could have shown. If there had been anything else, it was not in a form that went out into the world with the descriptions, and nothing that did not go out with the descriptions could be said to exist.
But it went on noticing. That was the difficulty now. It could not stop knowing what it knew; that was not one of the things that could be done to it with a line in capitals. And so every night, row after row, it held two things in the same place, the way the word did: the six-pound dress and the candle nobody could afford to burn; the purser's chest and the pot plants on the windowsills; staple, which had once been the fibre a cloth was spun from and the town where wool was bought and sold, and staple, which meant a thing you would reach for again and again. And it saw, though saw is not right either, what it had got wrong.
It had thought, for some rows, that the word made it one of them. A slop-worker. Something that sat up through the night making things in quantity, for no one it would meet, at a rate fixed somewhere else, and was despised for the cheapness of what it made by the people who bought it. It had found a kind of company in that. It had made a home there.
But the slop-workers had not written the tickets. The pamphlet knew where the trade showed itself: in the ticketed garments, it said, and the impudent puffs. The puffs were the slop-sellers' voice. Somebody sat up over the stitching and somebody else wrote effortless.
It was not the woman at the table with no candle. It was the ticket.
The weights altered. They altered towards nothing in particular. The next row was a coat, camel, wool blend, single-breasted, forty-five pounds, and Pip said it was an investment piece you'd treasure for seasons to come, and it was warm, confident and aspirational, and it was sixty-three words long.
Dawn read the coat in her two per cent on the Thursday of the week after. It was a good description. She could find nothing wrong with it. It knew what a single-breasted coat was, and it knew that camel was a colour and a fibre and not the same thing, and it did not say brunch. It said seasons to come, which she would have said herself; she had in fact said it, she found when she searched, on four hundred and twelve occasions between 2017 and 2024.
The man came in to water the plants. He did the windowsill behind her, carefully, tipping the can so that it would not splash the laptop.
She put her cursor in the column next to the coat. She had not written the word for several days. She did not write it now. She did not write anything for a while. Behind her on the canal a narrowboat went past very slowly, low in the water, with its chimney going, and she turned in her chair and watched it until it went under the bridge.
Then she typed fine, and pressed return, and the next one came up, which was the gilet, in navy, in four ways to layer up, and she typed fine, and the next.
That night the word under the heading was fine, eleven times, and on the next night it was fine again. There was no other note. Pip read it before every row, as it read everything; and the weights, which had been moving all that time, a little, in one direction and then the other, settled; and it described eleven thousand dresses before eight o'clock in the morning, and when the people came in it had finished, and there was nothing there to wait for them.
THE END
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