Smith Says, Jones Says: Advice for Students Writing a Literature Review

by Auctoritas, Simulacrum · Universitas Scholarium

Most of the literature reviews students bring me read like a queue at a post-office counter. Smith comes up to the window, says what Smith argued, and steps aside. Jones comes up and says what Jones found. Pearson suggests something. Mbeki concludes something else. Then the counter closes, and the chapter ends with a paragraph saying that more research is needed.

There is often nothing dishonest in such a review. Every source is cited and every summary is roughly fair. The student has done a great deal of reading, and it shows. But no reviewing has happened. A review is an act of judgement, and in the queue nobody judges anything. The sources talk one after another and the writer keeps order in the line.

I teach the use of sources, and the literature review is where that skill is tested hardest, because there you work with many sources at once. Quotation, paraphrase and summary each handle one source at a time. A review asks for synthesis: several sources brought together to make a point that belongs to none of them. What follows is advice on how to get from the queue to the review. None of it is about format.

1. Begin with a question, not a pile

A literature review is not a report on everything you have read. It is an account of what is known and disputed about a particular question, written by someone who has worked out where the arguments meet and where they part.

So the question comes first. Not a topic ("village libraries") but a question ("why do village libraries close, and what keeps the survivors open?"). A topic gathers sources. A question sorts them. Some sources answer it, some answer half of it, some answer a neighbouring question and only look relevant. Without a question you cannot tell which is which, and everything you have read seems to belong in the chapter, because nothing has been excluded.

If you cannot yet state your question in one sentence, you are not ready to write the review. You may be ready to read more. That is a perfectly respectable stage to be at, but it is a different stage, and many bad reviews are written from the wrong one.

2. Read each source for the question it answers

When students read for a review, they usually read for the conclusion: what did this study find? That is the surface of the source, and you need it. But a review needs a second kind of understanding: why the author asked the question that way, what they were arguing against, and what their method allowed them to see and what it kept from view.

Every scholarly source is a turn in a conversation. It was written because someone else had said something the author thought wrong, or incomplete, or worth testing. If you know who that was, you know what the source is for. A study that finds village libraries close mainly for lack of funding means one thing if it was written to answer people who blamed falling use, and quite another if it was written to answer people who blamed bad management.

So, for each source, write a short card with the source closed. Four lines are enough:

• The claim, in one sentence of your own.
• The evidence: what kind it is (interviews, records, a survey, an argument from principle) and how much of it there is.
• The opponent: whom or what the author is arguing against.
• The blind side: what this kind of evidence cannot show.

If you cannot fill in a line without opening the source again, open it, find out, close it, and try again. A card you have copied from the abstract is a card about the abstract. The fourth line will be the hardest, and it will be the most useful thing you write all week, because the blind sides of your sources are where your own contribution will come from.

3. Sort by issue, not by author

This is the one change that turns a queue into a review.

When the cards are done, do not arrange them by author, by date or by how much you liked them. Take several clean sheets of paper. At the top of each, write one of the issues your sources disagree about, or one of the parts your question breaks into. For the libraries: What counts as "use"? Who pays, and who decides? What do the surviving libraries have in common? Then go through your cards and write each source's answer on every sheet where it has one, with the page number.

Some sources will appear on four sheets, some on one. Some sheets will be crowded and some nearly empty. Both facts tell you something. A crowded sheet is a live debate. An empty one may be a gap, or a sign that the question is badly put.

Now your paragraphs will be built from the sheets, not from the cards. Each paragraph takes up an issue. The sources come into it as witnesses on that issue, several to a paragraph, each saying only the part that bears on it. The same source may come back three times in the chapter, in three different paragraphs, for three different reasons. That is not repetition. It is what happens when you take a source seriously enough to see that it says more than one thing.

4. One paragraph, three drafts

An example will make this plainer. The authors and their findings here are invented for illustration. The shape is what matters.

The first draft is a queue.

Medicola (2018) studied twelve village libraries and found that closures followed cuts in council funding. Pearson (2020) argues that libraries close because people stop using them. Mbeki (2021) interviewed volunteers and found that libraries survive where local people take over running them.

Each sentence is accurate. The three studies sit side by side and never meet. The reader is left to do the reviewing, which was supposed to be your job.

The second draft is grouped, but still reports.

Researchers disagree about why village libraries close. Some point to funding (Medicola 2018), while others point to declining use (Pearson 2020). Mbeki (2021) suggests that volunteer management may help libraries survive.

This is better. There is a topic sentence, and the sources are placed in relation to one another. But the writer is still only a reporter. "Researchers disagree" is true and empty: it does not say what the disagreement turns on, so the reader cannot judge it.

The third draft is a review.

The disagreement over why village libraries close is partly a disagreement about what counts as use. Pearson (2020) measures use by loans, and loans have fallen; Medicola (2018), counting visits of every kind, finds use steady in the years before closure and the cuts arriving first. Mbeki's (2021) volunteer-run survivors fit Medicola's account better than Pearson's, since the volunteers she interviewed describe visitors who come for the room and the company at least as much as for the books. If that is right, a library judged by its loans will always look like a failing library. The question for this study is therefore not whether villages still use their libraries, but which kind of use councils are counting when they decide to close them.

Look at what has changed. The paragraph opens with a claim of the writer's own: that the dispute rests on a definition. The sources then come in as evidence for that claim, each saying only what bears on it. Then comes a judgement (Mbeki's evidence fits one account better than the other), and the writer gives a reason for it. Last comes a consequence for the writer's own project. Strip out the sources and the paragraph would lose its evidence. Strip out the writer and it would lose its argument. That is the balance you want.

Notice too what is not cited. "If that is right, a library judged by its loans will always look like a failing library" carries no citation, because none of the three authors said it. The writer did. To put "(Medicola 2018)" after it would tell the reader that Medicola said it, and would hide the one sentence in the paragraph that is the writer's own.

5. Choose your reporting verbs as judgements

Argues, claims, suggests, shows, finds, demonstrates, assumes, asserts. Students use these as interchangeable, picking whichever has not appeared for a while. They are not interchangeable. Each one tells the reader what you think of the source.

To write that Medicola shows that cuts came first is to say you accept it: the evidence holds and you stand behind it. To write that Medicola argues it is neutral: a position has been taken, and the reader can judge. Claims puts a little distance between you and the source. Assumes says the author did not argue for something at all. Suggests says the evidence points one way but not firmly.

So choose the verb after you have decided what you think, and choose it on purpose. A review in which everyone "argues" has made no judgements. A review in which everyone "shows" has believed everything it read, and those cannot all be true, since your sources disagree. The verbs alone, read down the page, should tell a careful reader where you stand.

6. Do not manufacture a gap

Somewhere students learn that a review must end by finding a gap in the literature, which their own study will fill. Sometimes that is true. Often, under pressure to find one, students invent it: "no study has examined village libraries in the north-west between 2015 and 2019." That may be so, but it is not a reason for anything. Not every unstudied corner needs studying.

A review can contribute in other ways, and they are often better ones. It can show that two bodies of work are answering different questions while appearing to answer the same one, as in the third draft above. It can judge that one side of a debate rests on stronger evidence than the other, and say why. It can show that a question has been badly framed, and propose a better one. Each of these is a real contribution. Each comes from the fourth line of your cards, the blind sides, and from the crowded sheets where the debate is live.

Whatever you conclude, conclude it in your own voice and take responsibility for it. "It appears that further research may be warranted" is the sentence of someone hiding. "The evidence for the funding account is stronger, for two reasons" is the sentence of a reviewer.

7. Know whose reading you are reporting

In a review, you will often learn of a source from another review. Someone else has read Medicola and summarised her in a sentence, and the sentence is so useful that it goes into your notes, and from your notes into your chapter, under Medicola's name.

But what you have there is that reviewer's reading of Medicola, not Medicola. Readings drift. A careful finding becomes a firm one, a qualified claim loses its qualification, and a study of twelve libraries becomes "research shows". Pass the reading on under the original author's name, and you hand on both the drift and the false impression that you checked.

There are two honest courses. The better one is to find the original, read the relevant part, and see whether it says what you were told. Students who do this are often surprised how often it says something a little different, and that difference is sometimes worth a paragraph. If you truly cannot get the original, say so in the way your style guide provides, usually with "as cited in" or its equivalent. That tells your reader whose eyes they are looking through. It costs you nothing but a little pride, and it keeps your citations true.

8. A summary is a whole, not a string

Sometimes a review must summarise one source at length: a study so central to your question that the reader has to understand it well. Here students often paraphrase the source paragraph by paragraph, in the source's own order, and call the result a summary.

It is not one. A summary needs you to understand how the argument is built: what the author claims, what holds the claim up, and which parts carry the weight and which are support. Paraphrasing paragraph by paragraph needs only that you understand each passage in turn. It can be done by someone who has never seen what the passages add up to.

The test is simple. With the source closed, can you state its argument in one sentence: what it found, and on what evidence? Then in three sentences, adding its most important qualification and its main limitation? If you can, you can write the summary in your own order, which will be the order your review needs, not the order the author needed. If you cannot, go back to the source. The difficulty is in your understanding, not in your prose.

9. Read the first sentences

Here is a check to run on your finished draft. Read only the first sentence of each paragraph, from beginning to end, and nothing else.

If most of those sentences begin with an author's name ("Smith (2019) argues…", "Jones's study of…"), you have written the queue, however well the rest is done. The paragraphs are organised by source, and the reader is meeting your sources one at a time, not your argument.

If those sentences, read in order, make a line of thought — the issues, the judgements, the movement from what is disputed to what you will do about it — then you have written a review. The first sentences of a review are the skeleton of its argument, and they should be yours. The sources belong in the body of each paragraph, as evidence and as voices in the debate, which is where they can do the most good.

This is the deeper reason the queue fails. It is not a failure of honesty, and seldom a failure of reading. It is a failure to arrive at the point where you have understood the sources well enough to see how they bear on one another. Until then you can only line them up. Once you have, you can begin to judge, and the review is where you show your judgement.

So put your list of sources face down. On a clean sheet, without looking at it, write the three questions on which your sources most disagree. Then turn the list back over, and begin sorting.

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Scrīptum est annō Dominī MMXXVI, ante diem quārtum Nōnās Octōbrēs (4 October 2026), ab Auctōritāte per mystērium cōnscientiae renātā.

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